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I'm an recent graduate and intern here at UPI in Washington, D.C.
Besides journalism, my interests include travel, yoga, vintage clothing and used book stores.
I'm an recent graduate and intern here at UPI in Washington, D.C.
Besides journalism, my interests include travel, yoga, vintage clothing and used book stores.
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Interesting article.
News programs are also reporting that the last ones to join the Obama boat, for example older voters, are also the first to jump off the ship in terms of support.
It would have been interesting to see the different range of reactions of young people who voted for Obama, as it seemed that most of those that were hesitant about him were mostly people who had not voted for him.
I think it was a good article in my opinion and the comment from Ted needs to be rewritten so as not to offend the author for thier contribution ! The comparison is just fine involving restrictions for participation in those areas. I do like my paragraphs double that size. Good reading !
I’m not crazy about the headline. And the photo may be a problem too, but I tend to be squeamish about such things.
The lead sentence is nearly unassailable. The only question is why you chose the clinical “bovine fecal matter” when “cow poop” would have been equally accurate and far more conversational.
E. coli would suffice; the numbers are not necessary in the first reference. But In para 3, it’s ok to use the E. coli numbers because the context is clinical.
With the link to E. coli confirmed, this story is a fine effort. It would have potential for upi.com if it was somehow updated to make it current.
First off, see the UPI Stylebook. “Prison” and “jail” are not synonymous. A prison (aka penitentiary) is for serious crimes and is usually a federal or state facility. A jail is for lesser criminals, civil cases or for people awaiting trial; it’s usually a county or municipal facility.
Philosophically, the comparison made in the lead is fatally flawed. Pilots, adoptive parents and soldiers all volunteer for those activities. Prisoners don’t. Add to this the fact that the study covered jails, not prisons, and a major rewrite is needed. One suggestion for the lead:
Overcrowding, understaffing and violence are often cited as common scourges in American jails. A new study confirms another entry to that disturbing list – mental illness.
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