As the global recession lingers in Australia, social service workers say that more of the region’s senior citizens ar...(Read)
Nice story -- the quotes are engaging and move the story forward. The writing is lively.
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Nice story -- the quotes are engaging and move the story forward. The writing is lively.
Please pay special attention to American spellings and UPI style. Titles are not used (Dr., Mr., Mrs., etc.)
This story is a great candidate for UPI.com!
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Harumi Gondo commented on "Group helps retirees combat recession in Australia" (about 1 month ago)
Interesting story. It's best to keep yourself out of stories though (see paragraph 15: I would take "myself" out; it's implied that you are there since you are covering the story).