About Nishath
The quintessential small town guy, who like thousands of others have come down to Delhi to pursue heights in the big-bad-city.My thought process would include a world view with a hint of small town Indian perspective.
The quintessential small town guy, who like thousands of others have come down to Delhi to pursue heights in the big-bad-city.My thought process would include a world view with a hint of small town Indian perspective.
Special children have always been kept out of the limelight for their low level of intelligence. A look at one organization that defies the odds.(Read)
An act of arson in the forests of Wayanad in India(Read)
Love, life, luck? A look on the contemporary Muslim wedding south of India in God's Own Country - Kerala.(Read)
This is a nice travelogue, but not a news feature. However, the last paragraph does contain information that could be the basis of a news story on the arson, the investigation and the damage it caused.
Good: You had a nice story to tell and wrote it in a literary style that made it interesting.
Needs work: You should vary your writing style and word choice so that you can say everything you want to say in a tighter style that is preferred in journalism.
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nice homespun scoop from down south...add more chapters!!!
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Ted Iliff commented on " Some Love, Some Patience " (8 months ago)
This story needed more. More comments from parents and some of the children. More examples of how the center is helping the children in specific ways. More attribution to show the sources of the statistics.
The quotes in the story are very clinical and impersonal:
“The difficulties of the special children are complex, cumulative, multidimensional…”
"… can in turn prove developmental to their behaviour and improve their interaction quotient with the society…”
Highlighting programs like this usually makes a good feature, but a better focus would be the people being helped, and not so much the helpers.