Lucy Chumbley commented on "Balkan Schindler saved 12,000 children " (4 months ago)

I was really interested to learn about this remarkable woman. I hope she gets the recognition she deserves.

Donne Tempo commented on "War criminal granny defies age and victims" (6 months ago)

It seems spell check went ahead and auto corrected some errors... but you can see these.

Donne Tempo commented on "War criminal granny defies age and victims" (6 months ago)

You also have a few typos

Criminam – Criminals
Broke the Hand – Broke Her Hand
Honours – Honors (what is UPIU style?)
Hinseberg,. - Hinseberg.
Realized – realized
According – According
Plavsic or Plavisic – you have it both ways
Mrs – Mrs.
Favourite – favorite
1992. and crime in Srebernica occurred in July 1995. That women overstate . – in 1992, and for crimes in Srebernica that occurred in July 1995.
mrs. Plavsic’s – Mrs. Plavsic’s

Donne Tempo commented on "War criminal granny defies age and victims" (6 months ago)

I would rework that lede totally:

Bosnian Serb Biljana Plavsic (80) welcomed freedom after six years spent in Swedish women's prison Hinseberg,.

One of the oldest war criminals in the world, Ms. Plavsic welcomed freedom after six years spent in Swedish women's prison Hinseberg. She was sentenced to 11 years of imprisionment by the International Criminal Tribunal for Former Yogoslavia. During her trial she was found guilty of crimes against humanity and ethnic cleansing of the Muslims and Croats in 37 Bosnian Municipalities between July 1991 and December 1992.

And then I would move my quotes up to support my lede and nut.

And everything else Ms. Potter said.

Jacquie Kubin, Editor

Beth Potter commented on "War criminal granny defies age and victims" (7 months ago)

Also, please be very careful not to use opinion words in your reporting unless they're attributed to a source.