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I am a mass com student from MCRC Jamia.
I am a mass com student from MCRC Jamia.
Close to 20,000 people in India and Nepal will have to move if an approved new dam is built, and they're not happy ab...(Read)
I would start article this:
Almost 19,500 people are going to lose their homelands and 120 Indian and about 50 Nepali villages will be displaced if....
there are some small grammatical mistakes in this article. but good article though.
This is certainly a worthy topic, and you have some nice reporting here.
However, much of the story is opinion, which should be attributed to your sources. Please make sure to get both sides of the story by asking both people in the villages and government officials what they think about this particular dam project. It also would be good to explain exactly how many new houses might get electricity from the proposed dam project, how much it is expected to cost, who is paying for it, and similar statistics.
With just a little more reporting and rewriting, this story would be a great candidate for UPI.com!
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I would start article this:
Almost 19,500 people are going to lose their homelands and 120 Indian and about 50 Nepali villages will be displaced if....